Raul Garcia tied many of the elements from the unit together, and in most cases spoke eloquently on the subject but faltered with minor grammatical errors in areas. By drawing many correlations he made the subject matter relatable, and drew better connections.
Jasmine Collins spoke very clearly and distinctly about individual forms of architecture, and related them each to the other. She had excellent transitions, vivid descriptions, and supported her points with rich quotes.
Jenni Ham chose a beautiful image to tie her piece together. She has great usage of cultural context. I have not seen this in other’s writings, she brings a new level of understanding to the material/subject matter. I appreciate the difference in her writing as compared to other's.
Through the exploration of each post I gained better understanding of the unit, or was reminded of information that I had forgotten. This exercise of critiquing our peers work was helpful in bringing about different points of view and discussions for us each to gain another perspective and understanding.
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